This is a record of my learning at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ.
i like your work but you need a bit more detail
I love your work maybe next time you can try and simle more
Hi Chelsea, good to read some information about you. However, you may like to change year 5 to year 4.
i like your work Chelsea because the words are cool
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nice work Chelsea i love the background i want it nice detail.
hi Chelsea,I like the way you did your All About Me work but you could of change the colour of your words in your and great job Chelsea.
HI Chelsea,your work really needs more detail because your story is short.
hey there, my name is Bailey.a and I go to gilberthorpe I really really super duper like this but try putting in more detail like if it were fact's about you and maybe or like if it where a story.
hi chelsea I love your all about me but you need a bit some detail
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i like your work but you need a bit more detail
ReplyDeleteI love your work maybe next time you can try and simle more
ReplyDeleteHi Chelsea, good to read some information about you. However, you may like to change year 5 to year 4.
ReplyDeletei like your work Chelsea because the words are cool
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ReplyDeletenice work Chelsea i love the background i want it nice detail.
ReplyDeletehi Chelsea,I like the way you did your All About Me work but you could of change the colour of your words in your and great job Chelsea.
ReplyDeleteHI Chelsea,your work really needs more detail because your story is short.
ReplyDeletehey there, my name is Bailey.a and I go to gilberthorpe I really really super duper like this but try putting in more detail like if it were fact's about you and maybe or like if it where a story.
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ReplyDeletehi chelsea I love your all about me but you need a bit some detail
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